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Subordinate clause
the city looked like a ghost town. The city had a peice of a london eye in it. The whether was bad.
The ecology of the planet collapsed after the thames finally ran out.
all hope was lost after the citizens ignored the warning sign.
Relative clause 2
The boy who was fast wasnt faster than john.
The robotic drone who helped his friend completed the extention.
Relative clause
The street had a variety of rubbish on it,which made him want to pock it up.
the street that was slowly coming apart had a bundle litter.
The street was calm, Which made him think he was lost and mental.
the pavement emitted warm steam, which made him think a bomb landed there.
the air smelled of decay food, which made him cover his nose and jog.
the man was wondering what happed while he was away from home.
the street, that was strewn with litter ,was totally deserted.
Dystopian writing
It’s the introduction of the kryptonite Olympics where the floating Olympic building shaped as kryptonite all the sports take place the first sport is the 200 death o’metres it’s not just a plain little race it’s got futuristic objects that they have to dodge or they will DIE. The death race is about to take of in 3..2..1..GO optimistic Tom has taken the lead but just behind him is is jack the killer jack the killer just took the lead but it’s not too late for optimistic Tom because a exo soldier just lobbed a silver ball that just took killer jacks head of but this ball was like a boomerang it just appeared back in his hand so killer jack was just a couple of death o’metres away and slipped in the blood path and slipped but just rolled through the finishing line but was so dizzy and he’s head was spinning. He got a see through holographic medal that floats around your neck. Next death activity is long jump but this isn’t like a normal long jump they get a boost from a special suit that over laps their body and its a jet pack but it shoots them up puts the most power of going up and gets the furthest wins this is measured in the units of ft. A man called Alex the wonder man come along and smashed it he got higher than any one of the history of any olympics other people didn’t even participate in the long jump they knew they will lose. The olympics that looked like kryptonite was kryptonite. The next death event is javelin but not normal javelin you have to throw a participant in to the crowd of people if he dies he has done bad stuff before the event the person that survives is heroic and helps loads of people. For the next sport the death ball throw the aim of the game is to throw the fiery ball at your crowd of people of 100 whoever kills the most lives if u lose u die. ready and throoowwww. tomorrow the events take place tomorrow at the kryptonite Olympics the only floating Olympics. It’s the next day of the kryptonite olympics and the javelin is going to continue and the 1st participate is called john ed. john ed Is panicking because he beamed at the fiery ball a right next to the muscular king which has biceps as big as a lumberjack. John ed was sweating you can see the see through drips dropping on the floor and splashing every where he knew he had no chance not a bit of determination was there. So it started all you see is a strong big fat man throw a red-hot ball at 100 people and he threw it too hard and it went over the people and hit a Vip guest everyone took a deep breath sound effect and he got taken away he wasn’t ment to hit the queen of England so he was disqualified from the event and as john ed thought it was over a bald skinny man who seemed very hyperactive and strong john ed huffed and puffed and took a deep breath and trew the red-hot ball he was surprised that he even had the bravery and the ball was dipping down at the crowd like it was world war 600 and killed the whole 100 people and the anonymous man in the suit the next participate was about to chuck the ball an loud noise all around the stadium come on and announced that the anonymous man in the suit was the director of the whole olympics was hit so everyone got evacuated away from the stadium and nothing was ever mentioned again.
creative writing
On top of Gotham was a dark devilish scary city with 100s of gigantic buildings on top of the buildings were 5 neon lighted big laser jets hiding behind the polluted clouds ruling the smokey city ground level of the city were loads of piles of stinky rubbish building on on top of each other under that was a smoked out river polluting the whole city the waves were pounding up and down the wall leaving stains of moss on the brick walls you can just tell a smoking apache helicopter is down there. In the deep sides of the city are broken matte black cars ready to get scrapped. Beyond the bridge were an old wide chocolate factory. In front of the old smokey factory was a pearcelent white jaguar from the 70s that had just pierced through a red light. The weather is really foggy but through the mist you can see a man in a white and black clean tuxedo he was really spotty he brung out an expensive blacked out camera and started taking photos of the factory no-one will never know if he was a tourist or not even know… The bridge its self looks like it just survived world war 1 and world war 2 together the green sticky moss was hanging of off the rust of the bolts that were about to come off and land in the polluted sea.
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