Opening:

  • me and my fellow soldiers in Bosnia
  • A smokey grey forest In Boznia with trees that are bombed and destroyed you can smell Cornite
  • dont give too much away.

Descriptive writing: 

  • The woods are burned you can see the grey ash of where the trees used to be and it smells like Cornite and the trees you can see are decendigrating.

Not going to say who it was.

Characterisation:

  • the main person is a caring person but is also very violent.
  • A bloody face with scars and got on army uniform with his name tag hanging off.
  • Voice is not too deep and not too high.

Tension and suspense

  • You can hear some shooting and you can hear rustling in the leaves that have fell down and crunching of the branches.
  • The fear late some soldiers of the opposition and also the wild animals looking for there pray and still some radiation in the air.